Water is one of the most important things in the world. Not just to us but to animals as well. Without water we won’t be healthy or we won’t survive. Lucky we have nice fresh water here in New Zealand. Water is so strong and powerful it helps with nearly anything like headaches, weight loss and can help your muscles or abs grow.
Water helps burn calories and your fat. Water keeps you hydrated and helps you avoid overeating. A lot of people confuse thirst for hunger. So the’ll tend to eat rather than drink water. Drinking 100 ounces a day could really help you. It may seem impossible but it isn’t. Maybe 2 cups of water after every meal.
Water helps you think, focus and concentrate better and be more alert. It also boosts your energy level. If you don’t drink water you will get dehydrated, which means your brain will shut down and not run at it’s full speed. It will will also cause exhaustion, headaches, sleep issues, stress and memory loss. You might even forget your family.
Water cleans out the toxins in your skin. If you want your skin to be healthier and look younger, all you have to do is drink water. By not drinking water you are making your skin dry, flakey and wrinkled, so you won’t look healthier and younger looking.
Now you know how important water is to everyone. You now have reasons why you need to drink water. So everyday you should have a glass of water to keep you fit, focused, and keep your skin as young as possible your. Make sure if you have a family keep them drinking water too.
Hi Telesia, I am really impressed with this explanation - your structure has come a long way in a short amount of time! You had an effective introduction, three body paragraphs containing facts and a conclusion. You also used present tense and addressed the reader (used the 2nd person perspective). Next we will work a little more on your paragraphs and sentences, to make sure the sentences flow and that there is a topic sentence and three clear supporting sentences in each paragraph.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your writing about saving water and why you should also drink water. It had lots of detail in it and it was really interesting to read.
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