Friday, 15 September 2017

Brushing our Teeth

Brushing our Teeth

Brushing our teeth is something that everybody should do everyday so that we don’t have rotten or smelly teeth. It involves a toothbrush and toothpaste.

How do you brush your teeth?
Of Course you have to have a toothbrush and toothpaste. Slowly squeeze the toothpaste onto the toothbrush, just so that it doesn't get all messy. Then start brushing your teeth. Gently move your brush back and forth in very short strokes. Brush the outer surfaces, the inner surfaces, and the chewing surfaces of the teeth.

Why do we brush our teeth?
It is very important to brush your teeth because you will get a lot decay or bacteria in your mouth. It will eat there way through your teeth and then soon it will fall out. If not you are at risk of plaque building up in your teeth. Plaque is a type of bacteria that occurs in everyone's mouth.

Why do teeth get dirty?
The reason why our teeth isn't looking as flash as we want them to is because the food that we are deciding to place in our mouths. For eg. Coke, Chips, Sweets, Candies and many more sugary and fat foods. These kinds of food are what we should stay away from and they are what are producing more and more bacteria into our mouths.

In conclusion everyone should brush their teeth daily unless they want to have smelly and rotten teeth.


  1. Hi Telesia,

    You have included lots of ideas and some great content specific vocabulary (like bacteria, plaque, strokes). As this was a quick write the focus was on getting ideas on paper, but if we spent longer on this piece of writing your next step would be to edit it. Well done for following the structure of an explanation and for increasing your use of academic language.

  2. Hi Telesia! My name is Telesia!

    You included lots of ideas to explain about Why we should brush and how! I love the descriptions and images you have used! Keep up the great work!

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