Thursday, 21 June 2018

Poem - Tamai

Throughout the week we have been focusing on writing poems with a meaningful  hidden message. My poem is about one person that is my role model and someone I love the most. My Loving Tamai (Dad) Here is my poem!


A light that beams with joy
Through bad or good cases
The lighthouse which guides
When there is only darkness
In your light I forget my misery
For I can face them tomorrow
A light that I look up to
To seek guidance and wisdom
A light so peaceful and tranquil

That shines a path as a guide
A light that I follow after
For it is my sun that shines
A light as bright as the sun
A light as pure as its sins
The light of the sun which
We receive, give much joy

and ecstasy


  1. Hi Telesia,

    Your poem was very interesting and deep. I liked the adjectives you used as well as the meaning of your poem. Keep it up!

    1. Hi Davarni, I am very happy that you have picked up the hidden messages and the meaning to my poem. Also for your lovely comment! Thank you

  2. ki ora telesia,
    i really enjoyed reading your poem about your father. i noticed a lot of adjectives and verbs. keep up the good work!

    1. Hi Salote, It is great that you have noticed all of the adjectives and verbs that I have used. Thank you for your lovely comment!


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