Throughout the week we have been focusing on writing poems with a meaningful hidden message. My poem is about one person that is my role model and someone I love the most. My Loving Tamai (Dad) Here is my poem!
Dad
A light that beams with joy
Through bad or good cases
The lighthouse which guides
When there is only darkness
In your light I forget my misery
For I can face them tomorrow
A light that I look up to
To seek guidance and wisdom
A light so peaceful and tranquil
That shines a path as a guide
A light that I follow after
For it is my sun that shines
A light as bright as the sun
A light as pure as its sins
The light of the sun which
We receive, give much joy
and ecstasy
Hi Telesia,
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very interesting and deep. I liked the adjectives you used as well as the meaning of your poem. Keep it up!
Hi Davarni, I am very happy that you have picked up the hidden messages and the meaning to my poem. Also for your lovely comment! Thank you
Deleteki ora telesia,
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed reading your poem about your father. i noticed a lot of adjectives and verbs. keep up the good work!
Hi Salote, It is great that you have noticed all of the adjectives and verbs that I have used. Thank you for your lovely comment!
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