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Tuesday, 17 October 2017

My Imagination Visit

In writing this week we learnt how to write to a specific audience. For example kids, adults, teenagers and the elderly. I have created a recount that is suitable for young children. 

So, I used less difficult words, kept it PG (so no violence, blood or killing) and added PG photos. Please Enjoy! :)


1 comment:

  1. Hi Telesia,

    What a fabulous story for younger children! I think your message about going to different places in your imagination was fabulous. Next time remember to make sure that you have not missed out any words. Its a great idea to read your work aloud or with a buddy to make sure of this.

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