In writing this week we learnt how to write to a specific audience. For example kids, adults, teenagers and the elderly. I have created a recount that is suitable for young children.
So, I used less difficult words, kept it PG (so no violence, blood or killing) and added PG photos. Please Enjoy! :)
Hi Telesia,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fabulous story for younger children! I think your message about going to different places in your imagination was fabulous. Next time remember to make sure that you have not missed out any words. Its a great idea to read your work aloud or with a buddy to make sure of this.